Keep writing.Ghostrider939Report 2012-09-30 21:21:41Main problem, Hank, is HUGE sentences. Will read on…anonymous readerReport 2013-09-05 22:23:505UO9eC Im obliged for the article post.Really thank you! Indian sex Very long diatribes bore most people shitless, and bored people can be less than complimentary in their assessments of your writing style. Yours Truly. And when you brought up Mendy’s new boyfriend who stole everything from her, I had to re-read it to get the wording correct. Break down the sentences into manageable chunks. From what I read I would give it a 7.6 out of 10. From what I read I would give it a 7.6 out of 10. Ken Doesn’t have a job? Yours Truly. From what I read I would give it a 7.6 out of 10. Let’s Start with the intro, so Ken is two years younger than Mendy who is 20, therefore Ken is 18 but still lives at home and Mendy helps him at times? From what I read I would give it a 7.6 out of 10. It’s also odd how you forget apostrophes for words like her’s. It’s also odd how you forget apostrophes for words like her’s. And when you brought up Mendy’s new boyfriend who stole everything from her, I had to re-read it to get the wording correct.
