Listen to yo momma boy and go play in traffic.anonymous readerReport 2013-04-01 16:42:18I agree with the first comment. Indian porn Just go to a sex site you moron you’ll find someone there even with your limited skills!!! Belongs in the garbage can, this would be unacceptable as a first very rough draft much less something to be posted!!!«1» so more description and your good to go 🙂 and it is a good attempt so albeit the negative things I am assured if you work on it you can be great at this c:anonymous readerReport 2013-03-31 21:42:51This yet another example of how not to write stories. Listen to yo momma boy and go play in traffic.anonymous readerReport 2013-04-01 16:42:18I agree with the first comment. Just go to a sex site you moron you’ll find someone there even with your limited skills!!! Quit wasting people’s time here you prissy little bitch. Only place for this story is the trashanonymous readerReport 2013-04-01 07:26:20Personally I think that this story may have potential, although as stated in the previous comment by that other reader it seems that it is much like a ‘rough draft’ but I think that you can work from this. You can’t write we know it and so do you.
