Thanks.«1» Second, please don’t leave us wondering what the two girls in the bathroom were up to. As I said before – good, creative story. Indian sex grammar was atrocious. As I said before – good, creative story. It will smooth out your style and make the story more “comfortable” to read. As I said before – good, creative story. It will smooth out your style and make the story more “comfortable” to read. Thanks for committing your time and effort to the art of writing and keep writing!anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 20:38:55Yeah, maybe actually finish primary school before attempting to write.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 20:18:57Very good story! It will smooth out your style and make the story more “comfortable” to read. Please follow up with another story. You left some great possibilities open for a second chapter. First, run your story past one of the volunteer editors to refine the grammar, spelling and punctuation. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-29 13:05:29Well. … Thanks.«1» Words were very strange, like using “defiant” instead of “definite” over and over implying it’s not merely a spelling error but some confusion on your part. grammar was atrocious. First, run your story past one of the volunteer editors to refine the grammar, spelling and punctuation. First, run your story past one of the volunteer editors to refine the grammar, spelling and punctuation.
