Perhaps next time tell us how old the sister is?anonymous readerReport 2013-07-24 00:08:45How in the fuck can you spell the word “trudge” correctly but not whore (“hor” as you spelled it)? Indian sex You’ve given me a headache with your utter stupidity you ridiculous cretin!!!anonymous readerReport 2013-07-23 14:35:15Ok a comment. Honestly this ranks in the top five if the worst stories I have ever seen posted on the web anywhere!!! 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-07-24 02:57:12It’s a good first try. cut your fucking fingers off that way you are unable to do so even if you’re tempted to do so in the future. PLEASE either learn english or wait till you finish middle school before you even attempt writing again. Between the constant use of wrong words everywhere and the absolutely screwed up structering of phrases. This was just absolute shit, if you consider writing another story take my advice… Thanks or sharing the story. Perhaps next time tell us how old the sister is?anonymous readerReport 2013-07-24 00:08:45How in the fuck can you spell the word “trudge” correctly but not whore (“hor” as you spelled it)? It was a cute story. 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-07-24 02:57:12It’s a good first try. This was just absolute shit, if you consider writing another story take my advice… Between the constant use of wrong words everywhere and the absolutely screwed up structering of phrases.
