I hope you get better, just keep trying, but get some help!!!anonymous readerReport 2013-04-21 06:15:33not telling. Indian sex Do you leave your house half dressed in the morning? There was no flow, it was totally confusing, and I had to give up reading it half way through. Have some pride, clean up your work before posting, this is so erroneous I have no idea whether you have any potential or not.«12» If you had re-read it, you may have been able to make it better, and a good Proof Reader (or even a friend reading it) would have helped you tremendously. please don’t tell us any more stories.anonymous readerReport 2013-04-21 00:40:31Tag should have been Teen male/ Teeb female/ Blowjob. . …Also lots of spelling mistakesanonymous readerReport 2013-04-20 17:32:21I can’t understand for the life of me why you would post unedited work? I really did try, but it just got too much for me. Do you leave your house half dressed in the morning? If you had re-read it, you may have been able to make it better, and a good Proof Reader (or even a friend reading it) would have helped you tremendously.
