The relationship between Andrew and Sindee is what it is and I will get better about writing characters only through the feedback I receive, I’m glad so many people enjoy the story as it is my first venture into writingAnonymous readerReport 2013-12-19 23:06:17Amen nightslayer wonderful point
Kryptanonymous readerReport 2013-09-10 06:32:30Fuck all you haters and assholes who cant accept things. . Indian sex video …piss off this story Is Awsome. . . … Keep the faith. . … Keep the faith. . … ~NightSlayeranonymous readerReport 2013-07-01 17:06:58And also that they start to laugh hysterically when realizing how tired they were, its just to forced, what I mean by forced is that you want their romance to be so unanimous and perfect that there are near to no differences in opinion between the couple and try to show how perfect their relationship is by such almost comical passages because of how ridiculous it seems. Make it more natural, let them have some arguments, that’s the true reality of a loving couple, that they have differences but with their love for each other they overcome those differences, I hope it isn’t to aggressive, I tried to make this as constructive as possible.«1234» I asked for the feedback because I want to improve my writing and storytelling. 16 comments«1234»Anonymous readerReport 2014-11-30 20:55:09Everyone has their opinion on what they like And some can’t accept the perfection of love.
