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With the effort it takes to add the ‘ it makes it just too deliberate, for me. Might be just me tho!anonymous readerReportĀ 2011-11-29 00:40:03ANOTHER GREAT PART WELL WRITTI=EN AND THE STORY IS SOGOOD KEEP THE SERIES GOING
;; JJĀ«1Ā» I like a story that explains the whole picture, so leaving out big details like this lessens the experience for me. one small critique. one small critique. Everything else was great. My one wish would be for you to stop ending words with an apostrophe, but write either for example hearin or hearing. I assume this was her first time, so where was the explanation of her hymen breaking? Might be just me tho!anonymous readerReportĀ 2011-11-29 00:40:03ANOTHER GREAT PART WELL WRITTI=EN AND THE STORY IS SOGOOD KEEP THE SERIES GOING
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With the effort it takes to add the ‘ it makes it just too deliberate, for me. Everything else was great. Everything else was great. Everything else was great. My one wish would be for you to stop ending words with an apostrophe, but write either for example hearin or hearing. My one wish would be for you to stop ending words with an apostrophe, but write either for example hearin or hearing. My one wish would be for you to stop ending words with an apostrophe, but write either for
