Anyway, I really liked your story. I guess I just read your stories because you seem to have great ideas, but you just lack the skill at getting them down. Indian sex However, the beginning was strong but then on the end with the sex, you totally let us down. Secondly, why would someone who prays be on this site? Id like to read more of this story though.anonymous readerReport 2011-07-05 17:52:53Your poor thing,it wasent fair for you at all to have to grow up with that discussting disfunctionality i hope you personnaly find peace in your life as you know it my love is praying for you.«1» However, the beginning was strong but then on the end with the sex, you totally let us down. You’re a fucked up person! I guess a neutral vote is in order because, like I said before, you have great ideas; you just need to tell them better.anonymous readerReport 2011-07-05 20:21:01First of all, this isn’t true. I am not going to tell you how you should write, but please check your work before posting. It’s labeled “Dark Fantasy”. keep trying! 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-07-10 06:58:29poor writing and story telling skillsm but good ideas. Secondly, why would someone who prays be on this site? You’re a fucked up person! keep trying! You’re a fucked up person! Anyway, I really liked your
